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Chapter 14 - THE ENEMY STRIKES

The first month passed in a blur of activity.

Specialists examined Mia from every angle. They ran blood tests, genetic scans, and comprehensive evaluations. They studied Julian’s medical notes—released publicly as part of the court filings—and began building their own understanding of the condition.

But the results were frustratingly incomplete. The disease was unlike anything in standard medical literature. Julian’s research was decades ahead of public science… and deliberately incomplete. He’d kept the most critical findings to himself.

Then the first incident happened.

It began on a Tuesday morning. Mia woke cheerful, ate breakfast, and played with her toys. By noon, she complained of a headache. By late afternoon, she was burning with fever, shivering and confused.

I called the doctors immediately. They arrived within minutes. As they examined her, I watched her slip in and out of clarity. She looked at me, then frowned as if seeing a stranger.

“Mommy?” she whispered uncertainly.

“It’s me, baby. I’m right here.”

She stared at me, blinking slowly. “You look… different.”

My heart sank. Exactly as Julian’s letter had described. Disorientation. Perceptual changes.

The fever broke by evening. Mia fell into a deep sleep and woke the next morning as if nothing had happened. But the doctors were grave.

“The disease is activating,” the lead specialist told us. “Exactly according to the timeline. And as Julian warned, it affects cognitive function as well as physical.”

“Can we treat it?” Adrian asked.

“We can manage symptoms. Reduce fever. Ease discomfort. But to truly treat it… we need his full research. The missing protocols. The specific therapies he developed.” The doctor looked at us helplessly. “Without them, we’re working blind.”

Vanessa stood apart, pale and silent. She knew what this meant.

Two days later, the second episode came. Shorter. Mild. But Mia asked me again—who I was. She looked at her own hands with confusion, as if they didn’t belong to her.

And then came the letter.

Delivered by courier, no return address. Written in Julian’s distinctive, firm handwriting.

**THE FIRST SIGNS HAVE APPEARED. SHE WILL EXPERIENCE CONFUSION, FEAR, AND LOSS OF CLARITY. IT WILL WORSEN. BRING HER TO ME. I CAN SLOW IT. I CAN TEACH HER TO MANAGE IT. EVERY DAY YOU DELAY BRINGS HER CLOSER TO SUFFERING. DO NOT LET YOUR PRIDE KILL HER.**

Adrian crumpled the letter in his fist. “Blackmail. Pure and simple.”

“Is he wrong?” Vanessa asked quietly. “About what happens next?”

“Even if he’s right… we can’t hand her over,” I said. “Once we’re inside his control, we never get out. He dictates everything. Her life. Her treatment. Her future.”

“And if she gets worse?” Vanessa’s voice cracked. “If she stops recognizing us?”

“Then we find another way.” I stood firm, though my heart trembled. “We publish what we have. Every symptom. Every detail. We tell the world exactly what Julian is holding back. We beg for help. If he can hoard the cure, we can make the world demand it.”

That night, while Mia slept, I sat beside her bed and watched her breathe. I thought of everything Julian had said. Every warning. Every threat. Every twisted, terrifying claim he’d made about saving her.

And then I noticed something on her wrist—a faint, silvery mark that hadn’t been there before. It looked like a tiny, branching line, pale and almost beautiful against her skin.

I pulled up Julian’s medical notes. Scrolling through the descriptions, I found it—buried in a footnote.

**WHEN THE MARK APPEARS UPON THE SKIN, THE DISEASE HAS PROGRESSED TO THE SECOND STAGE. TREATMENT MUST BEGIN WITHIN THIRTY DAYS OR THE EFFECTS BECOME PARTLY PERMANENT.**

Thirty days.

I looked at the calendar on the wall. Counted forward.

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Mia’s seventh birthday.

Julian had given us exactly until her birthday.

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