Thinking

Chapter 3: The Evidence She Forgot to Destroy

At 8:17 the next morning, Brianna walked into the kitchen wearing a white cashmere sweater and the expression of someone who had never faced a consequence in her life.

I was sitting at the table surrounded by fabric scraps.

My fingers were covered in tiny pinpricks. I'd slept for less than two hours.

Brianna poured herself orange juice.

"Still playing designer?""

I continued cutting a piece of white satin.

She leaned over the table.

"Wow. You really are making another dress.""

"Move your glass.""

She looked down at the pattern pieces.

"What's this supposed to be? A funeral gown?""

I kept cutting.

"Move the glass, Brianna.""

She laughed and deliberately set it on top of one of my paper patterns.

Orange juice spilled across the corner.

I snatched the pattern away.

"What is wrong with you?""

"Relax. It's just paper.""

"It's my design.""

"Then draw another one.""

I stared at her.

For a second, I wanted to throw the glass against the wall.

Instead, I took a paper towel and began blotting the stain.

Brianna watched me work.

"You know, I was thinking about something last night.""

I didn't respond.

"Since your original dress is gone, maybe you should just withdraw. It would be embarrassing if you showed up wearing a pile of scraps.""

I placed the stained pattern beside the sewing machine.

"Why do you care?""

She paused.

"Because you're making Dad miserable.""

I almost laughed.

"You burned my dress.""

"And you keep talking about it.""

"You burned the dress I spent three months making.""

"Yes, Nia. We all know.""

She snatched a piece of blue chiffon from the table.

I stood.

"Put that down.""

She held it up against her sweater.

"Actually, this color would look good on me.""

"Brianna.""

"What? Are you going to call the police over a piece of fabric?""

I stepped forward and took the chiffon from her hand.

She shoved my shoulder.

I stumbled backward, catching the edge of the table.

A box of needles rattled.

Before either of us could speak, Dad entered the kitchen.

"What's going on?""

Brianna immediately changed her expression.

"Nothing, Dad. Nia's upset again.""

I looked at her in disbelief.

Dad's eyes moved from the spilled juice to the pattern in my hand.

"Brianna, did you touch her work?""

"I was just looking.""

"Then look from a distance.""

Her mouth fell open.

"Dad!""

"Go upstairs.""

"But—"

"Now.""

Brianna threw her hands into the air.

"This is ridiculous!""

She stomped out, making certain every step could be heard.

Dad waited until she was gone.

"Are you all right?""

I nodded.

He examined the stained pattern.

"Can you use it?""

"I can redraw it.""

He pulled out a chair.

"Then let's get you some fresh paper.""

He brought me a stack from his office and sat quietly while I redrew the damaged section.

For the first time in years, I didn't feel like I had to defend my right to take up space in my own home.

But I still had a deadline.

The mandatory inspection was at ten the next morning.

The competition itself was three days away.

I worked through the afternoon, stitching the new gown together piece by piece.

At five, Dad brought dinner to the workroom.

At eight, he replaced the bulb in my sewing lamp.

At midnight, he fell asleep in the chair beside the door.

I kept sewing.

Every time I felt my concentration slipping, I looked at the sketch of my mother's gown.

The new design was different.

It had no enormous princess skirt and no thousands of sparkling crystals.

Instead, it used layers of white satin and pale blue chiffon, with darker sapphire embroidery sweeping diagonally across the bodice. Silver thread traced the edges of the blue patterns, creating the illusion of fractured glass being held together by delicate strands of light.

The train was shorter than the original, but it flowed beautifully.

I added tiny blue flowers near the waist.

Not enough to recreate my mother's design.

Just enough to honor it.

By six in the morning, the gown stood on the dress form.

I stepped backward.

My left eye followed the line of the skirt. I adjusted the lamp, moved closer, and checked the embroidery one final time.

It wasn't perfect.

One section of the train was slightly uneven.

A few stitches near the waist were more visible than I'd intended.

But the dress had something my original design hadn't possessed.

A story.

I touched the fabric.

"I hope you like it, Mom.""

Then I packed the gown carefully into a garment bag, placed my sketches in a folder, and prepared to leave.

As I reached for my mother's old sketchbook, something slipped from between its pages.

A small envelope.

Yellowed with age.

My name was written on the front in my mother's handwriting.

Nia — open when you're ready.

My breath caught.

I had looked through that sketchbook hundreds of times.

How had I never noticed it?

I opened the envelope with trembling fingers.

Inside was a folded letter and a small photograph.

The photograph showed my mother standing beside a tall man in a dark suit. Behind them was a banner bearing the name of a fashion exhibition.

My mother looked younger than I remembered, her hair pinned up, her face bright with excitement.

On the back, she'd written:

My first collection. One day, you will have your own.

I unfolded the letter.

My darling Nia,

If you are reading this, you are probably old enough to understand why I kept drawing dresses even when people told me I was wasting my time.

I once entered a regional design competition. I was terrified. I thought everyone would laugh at my work because I came from a small town and couldn't afford the fabrics other designers used.

But someone believed in me.

His name was Julian Vale. He was a judge at the exhibition, and he taught me that a designer's greatest gift is not the ability to make something beautiful. It is the ability to make people feel something.

If you ever decide to follow this dream, find the courage to show the world what you create.

Don't let anyone convince you that your limitations are the most interesting thing about you.

You are so much more than what the world sees at first glance.

Love always,

Mom.

I read the letter twice.

Then I pressed it to my chest.

Julian Vale.

I'd heard that name before.

He was a respected fashion designer who had built an international career after winning several major competitions. Our school had announced that a guest judge would attend the regional exhibition, but they hadn't revealed his identity.

Could it be the same man?

I carefully returned the letter to its envelope.

Then I packed it beside the sketchbook.

I had no idea whether it would matter.

But it felt like a piece of my mother had been returned to me.

At 9:40, Dad drove me to school.

I carried the gown into the design department, where several finalists were already waiting.

Some wore expensive outfits.

Others carried elaborate portfolios and garment bags with professional labels.

A girl named Chloe Bennett approached me.

She had short red hair, silver glasses, and a collection of fabric swatches clipped to her portfolio.

"Nia, right?""

"Yes.""

"I'm Chloe. I saw your preliminary sketch last month. The blue flowers were beautiful.""

My throat tightened.

"Thank you.""

She glanced at the garment bag.

"Is that the finished dress?""

I nodded.

"Can I see it?""

Before I could answer, a familiar voice came from behind us.

"Careful, Chloe. It might be contagious.""

Brianna walked into the room wearing a fitted black dress and gold earrings.

She wasn't carrying a garment bag.

She didn't need to.

Her entry was a sleek black evening gown she'd purchased from a boutique and modified with a few decorative additions.

The competition rules required original designs, but Brianna had convinced Vanessa to argue that her modifications were sufficient.

She'd even submitted photographs of the original gown as proof of her work.

Chloe frowned.

"What's that supposed to mean?""

Brianna smiled.

"Nothing. I just wouldn't get too close to Nia's project. She's had a difficult few days.""

I gripped the garment bag.

"Leave me alone.""

Brianna tilted her head.

"I'm trying to be nice.""

"No, you're trying to humiliate me.""

A few students turned to look.

Brianna's smile sharpened.

"Then perhaps you should stop giving people reasons.""

Before I could respond, the competition coordinator entered.

Ms. Harper was a tall woman with silver hair and a clipboard tucked beneath one arm.

"Finalists, please gather around. We have a change to today's inspection procedure.""

Everyone fell silent.

Ms. Harper placed a folder on the table.

"One of our guest judges has requested that every finalist provide evidence of the design process. That includes sketches, material selections, and preliminary construction photographs where available.""

My stomach tightened.

I had plenty of sketches.

I had photographs of the gown at different stages.

But the original gown no longer existed.

Ms. Harper continued.

"We will also be reviewing the originality of every submission. Any design found to have been copied or purchased rather than created by the student may be disqualified.""

Brianna's smile faltered.

Only for a moment.

Then she lifted her chin.

"That's fair," she said loudly.

"Some people need to learn that talent can't be faked.""

Her eyes settled on me.

I didn't respond.

Ms. Harper called the first finalist forward.

One by one, students presented their work.

When my turn arrived, I placed my portfolio on the table and carefully removed the new gown from its garment bag.

A murmur passed through the room.

Even Chloe looked surprised.

The white satin and sapphire chiffon caught the light. The silver embroidery shimmered as the train unfolded across the display platform.

Ms. Harper leaned closer.

"This is quite different from your preliminary submission.""

"Yes, ma'am.""

"Why?""

I took a breath.

"Because the original design was destroyed.""

The room went silent.

Ms. Harper looked up.

"Destroyed?""

"Someone set it on fire.""

Brianna made a small, dismissive sound.

"She's exaggerating.""

Ms. Harper turned toward her.

"Do you have something to add, Miss Reed?""

Brianna folded her arms.

"It was an accident.""

I stared at her.

"You poured gasoline on it.""

"I was trying to scare you.""

"And then you lit it.""

A student near the back gasped.

Ms. Harper raised one hand.

"Enough. We will address this properly after the inspections.""

She turned back to me.

"Nia, do you have evidence of your original design?""

I opened my portfolio and placed my preliminary sketches on the table.

Then I showed her the photographs I'd taken during construction.

There was the bodice, half-finished.

The skirt spread across the sewing table.

The blue flowers before the crystals had been added.

And finally, a photograph of the completed gown, taken the night before the fire.

Ms. Harper studied each image carefully.

"These are excellent records.""

She lifted the last photograph.

"Did you create the original gown yourself?""

"Every stitch.""

"And this new one?""

"Every stitch.""

She examined the embroidery on the finished dress.

"Why did you choose this particular pattern?""

I looked at the silver lines running across the sapphire fabric.

"Because I wanted the dress to show that something can be damaged without losing its beauty.""

Ms. Harper's expression softened.

"That's a thoughtful concept.""

Then she turned to the coordinator.

"Please record that this submission is accepted for the next round.""

Relief washed over me.

I had made it.

Despite the fire, despite Brianna, despite everything, I was still in the competition.

As I packed my sketches, Brianna stepped forward.

"That's ridiculous.""

Ms. Harper looked at her.

"Is there a problem, Miss Reed?""

"She doesn't even have the original dress. How do you know those photographs are real?""

"Because the photographs include the construction process.""

"She could have copied someone else's design and taken pictures of fabric.""

I felt my fingers tighten around the portfolio.

Ms. Harper's voice grew firm.

"If you have evidence of misconduct, submit it formally. Otherwise, I suggest you concentrate on your own entry.""

Brianna flushed.

She turned toward me.

"This isn't over.""

I met her gaze.

"For once, I agree.""

She stepped closer, lowering her voice.

"You think you're clever because you made a sad little dress from scraps? You have no idea what you're doing.""

I glanced at her black gown.

"At least mine is original.""

Her face turned scarlet.

"You little—"

"Miss Reed!""

Ms. Harper's sharp voice cut through the room.

Brianna backed away.

I thought that was the end of it.

Then the coordinator hurried through the door, holding a phone.

"Ms. Harper, the guest judge has arrived.""

The room stirred.

Ms. Harper straightened her jacket.

"Excellent. Please bring him in.""

The door opened.

A tall man with silver hair entered, accompanied by two assistants. He wore a dark suit and carried a slim leather folder.

His eyes moved across the room, taking in the displays.

Then he stopped in front of my gown.

He stared at the sapphire flowers.

His expression changed.

Slowly, he turned toward me.

"Who designed this?""

I raised my hand.

"I did. My name is Nia Carter.""

He looked at me for several seconds.

Then he opened his leather folder and removed a faded photograph.

It showed a young woman standing beside a half-finished white gown covered in blue flowers.

My mother.

The man looked from the photograph to my dress.

His voice dropped to a whisper.

"Elena's daughter?""

I nodded, barely breathing.

He closed his eyes for a moment.

Then he looked at the room, his expression suddenly grave.

"Before we continue," he said, "I need to tell you something about your mother's design.""

He turned the photograph over.

May you like

And what I saw written on the back made my blood run cold.

*The original gown had never been intended for a competition. It had been created for a woman who stole my mother's work—and that woman was standing right behind me.*

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