Thinking

Chapter 1: Hair on the Bridal Suite Floor

The sound of my mother crying was the first thing I heard when I opened the bridal suite door.

Not music. Not laughter. Not the excited voices I had imagined hearing on the morning I was supposed to marry the man I loved.

Crying.

And when I saw my mother, Evelyn, sitting in front of the gold-framed mirror with uneven chunks of hair scattered across her champagne-colored dress, I knew my wedding day had just become something I would never forget.

My wedding hairstylist, Vanessa, stood behind her with silver scissors in one hand.

A thick lock of my mother's hair hung between her fingers.

"What did you do to my mom?"" I screamed.

Vanessa glanced at me through the mirror before lowering the scissors onto the vanity.

"Don't be dramatic, Nia.""

I rushed to my mother.

"Mom, look at me. What happened?""

She tried to speak, but her lips trembled so badly that no words came out at first.

I knelt beside her chair and gently lifted a section of hair away from her cheek.

My mother had spent eight months growing her hair for this wedding. She wanted a soft, elegant updo, something that would make her feel beautiful standing beside me when I walked down the aisle.

Now, one side barely reached her ears. The other hung in ragged pieces against her neck.

There was nothing accidental about the pattern of those cuts.

"She said she was fixing it," Mom whispered.

I looked at Vanessa.

"Fixing what?""

Mom swallowed.

"I told her I didn't like the way she was cutting it. I asked her to stop.""

My fingers tightened around hers.

"And?""

A tear rolled down my mother's cheek.

"She kept cutting.""

For a moment, the room seemed to tilt.

"You kept cutting her hair after she told you to stop?""

Vanessa folded her arms.

"Your mother moved her head while I was working. I had to correct the damage.""

"You cut half her hair off.""

"I said it was an accident.""

"You don't accidentally do this much damage.""

Vanessa gave a short, humorless laugh.

"Maybe if she had followed instructions, we wouldn't be having this conversation.""

My mother flinched.

That tiny movement hurt more than Vanessa's words.

My mother had spent her entire life making herself smaller so other people could be comfortable. She had worked double shifts at a hospital after my father died eleven years earlier. She had sold her jewelry to pay for my college tuition and quietly skipped meals whenever money was tight.

She never complained.

Not when she came home with swollen feet.

Not when she fell asleep at the kitchen table over unpaid bills.

Not even when she had to tell me that the little savings she had set aside for herself would go toward my education instead.

And now, on the one day I had wanted her to feel like a queen, someone had deliberately humiliated her.

The bridal suite door swung open.

Marcus walked in wearing his black tuxedo, his tie perfectly straight and a white rose pinned to his lapel.

My fiancé.

The man I was supposed to marry in less than two hours.

He took one look at the scattered hair, the scissors, and my mother's tear-streaked face.

Then he walked straight to Vanessa.

"What's going on?""

Vanessa's expression crumpled into something that looked suspiciously like innocence.

"Your bride is attacking me because I had a little accident while doing her mother's hair.""

Marcus turned toward me.

"Nia, calm down.""

I stared at him.

"Did you just tell me to calm down?""

He exhaled as if I were inconveniencing him.

"We have two hundred guests downstairs. We don't have time for a scene.""

"Look at my mother.""

"I can see her.""

"Then ask her what happened.""

Marcus glanced at Evelyn.

Mom lowered her eyes.

He turned back to Vanessa.

"Was it an accident?""

Vanessa nodded quickly.

"Of course. I was trying to fix the layers, and she suddenly moved.""

Marcus placed a reassuring hand on Vanessa's shoulder.

"See? That's all this is.""

My stomach twisted.

"How do you know she's telling the truth?""

His eyebrows drew together.

"Because I trust her.""

The room went quiet.

I looked at his hand resting on Vanessa's shoulder.

Then at the way she leaned ever so slightly toward him.

Something about the gesture bothered me, although I couldn't have explained why.

"You weren't even here," I said.

Marcus lowered his voice.

"Nia, please. Don't make me choose between keeping this wedding on schedule and indulging your anger.""

I actually laughed.

Not because anything was funny.

Because I couldn't believe the man standing in front of me was the same man who had once driven forty minutes through a snowstorm to bring my mother her favorite soup when she had the flu.

The same man who had held my hand at my father's grave and promised he would always protect my family.

Vanessa lifted her sleek ponytail over one shoulder.

"Honestly, your mother should have sat still. Hair grows back.""

My mother made a small, wounded sound.

Something inside me went very still.

I rose from my knees.

"Apologize to her.""

Vanessa tilted her head.

"Excuse me?""

"Apologize. You cut her hair after she told you to stop.""

"I don't take orders from you.""

"You're working at my wedding.""

"And you're acting like a spoiled child.""

Marcus stepped between us.

"Enough, Nia.""

"Move.""

"You're embarrassing yourself.""

I looked over his shoulder at my mother.

She was trying to brush the cut strands from her dress with shaking hands.

I had imagined a hundred things that might go wrong on my wedding day. A delayed ceremony. A broken heel. A forgotten bouquet.

Never this.

Never the man I loved standing between me and someone who had hurt my mother.

Vanessa gave me a smug little smile.

"Maybe next time she'll learn to listen.""

My gaze landed on the silver scissors lying on the vanity.

Before Marcus could react, I picked them up.

"Nia," he warned.

I turned toward Vanessa.

"What are you doing?"" she demanded.

I stepped behind her and grabbed her long ponytail.

Her eyes widened.

"Let go of me!""

I closed the scissors.

SNIP.

Her ponytail dropped into my hand.

Vanessa screamed so loudly that someone outside the room knocked on the door.

"MY HAIR!""

I placed the severed ponytail on the vanity beside the scissors.

"Hair grows back.""

Vanessa spun around, clutching the uneven ends behind her head.

Marcus grabbed my wrist.

"Have you lost your mind?""

I yanked my hand away.

"Don't touch me.""

"You just assaulted her!""

"And what did she do to my mother?""

His mouth opened.

I waited for him to say something that might save the last four years of my faith in him.

He didn't.

Instead, he turned to Vanessa.

"Are you hurt?""

She threw herself against his chest.

"She ruined my hair! Marcus, you have to do something!""

He wrapped an arm around her.

"I will. I promise.""

I stared at them.

There it was.

The answer I had been waiting for.

He hadn't asked my mother whether she was hurt.

He hadn't examined the damage.

He hadn't even demanded that Vanessa explain why she had ignored a clear request to stop.

He had chosen his side before he had heard the truth.

I looked down at the diamond ring on my finger.

Two years earlier, Marcus had slipped it onto my hand beneath the lights of a little restaurant overlooking the river.

"I will never let anyone hurt you or your family," he had promised.

I had cried when he said it.

Now I wondered whether he had been practicing a line.

I pulled the ring off.

Marcus noticed immediately.

"Nia, don't.""

I placed it in his palm.

"The wedding is canceled.""

His face drained of color.

"What?""

"You heard me.""

"We have guests. We have contracts. We have a ceremony in less than two hours.""

"And I have a mother who was crying alone while your friend cut her hair.""

"She's not my—"

He stopped.

It was a tiny hesitation.

But I saw it.

Vanessa looked at him sharply.

For the first time since I had entered the room, neither of them seemed to know what to say.

I turned to help my mother stand.

"Nia," Mom whispered, "please don't throw away your future because of me.""

I held her face between my hands.

"You're not the reason I'm throwing anything away.""

Her eyes filled again.

I pressed my forehead against hers.

"You're the reason I finally see what I'm holding.""

I helped her put on her coat and took her hand.

Marcus stepped toward the door.

"Think carefully about what you're doing.""

I stopped beside him.

"I have been thinking carefully for four years.""

His jaw tightened.

"You'll regret this.""

"Maybe. But I would regret marrying you more.""

I walked out with my mother.

Behind us, Vanessa began shouting about calling the hotel manager and reporting me to the police.

Marcus didn't follow immediately.

I knew because I listened for his footsteps.

I wanted him to follow.

I wanted him to apologize.

I wanted him to say that he had panicked, that he had been wrong, that he loved me enough to stand up for the woman who had raised me.

Instead, my phone vibrated inside my white bridal purse.

An unknown number.

The message contained one sentence.

*Nia, don't leave the hotel until you see what your fiancé did last night.*

Beneath it was a photograph.

Marcus stood beside a black SUV in the hotel's underground parking garage.

It was timestamped 11:47 p.m., the night before my wedding.

He wasn't alone.

Vanessa was standing beside him, wearing the same emerald-green dress I had seen her carry into the hotel that afternoon.

Her hand rested against his chest.

His hand was wrapped around her waist.

But that wasn't the part that made my blood run cold.

In the background, reflected in the SUV's rear window, stood a third person.

Someone holding a folder with my name printed across the front.

And as I enlarged the photograph, I recognized the person holding it.

May you like

My future mother-in-law.

Patricia.

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